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Dear Mr.Green 
I looking your poster. I'm writing to enquire about staying at your English camp. I looking your poster .Can you please give some further information ?
My son is very like english. This 15$ in day ? And teacher man or woman ? this in 12;30 ? 
My son went to the football . 
Thanks for lasons.English it's Cool !
Vlad Kechaev 

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Dear John Brown

I'm writing to enquire about staying at your sport camp . Can you please give some further information ?

Firsly I'd like to know about the cost. And how many people will be in each group.What is the type of accommodation. How many hours you'll go into the water.I am particularly interested in doing advert and would like to know if this is possible.

Many thanks in advance for your help.

Yours,

Kechaev Vladislav